“Natural Speech” at Earth & Altar; Brautigan on Substack

I’m excited to have another sonnet up at Earth & Altar, with one more coming next week.

I’m not a formalist by any means, but working through the mechanics of a sonnet is a great way to stay sharp. It forces you to think in new ways about compression, symbol-work, image-stacking, and what I’ll call the stakes (the “so what,” the thing the volta turns to, the reason, and, in classical sonnets, the argument).

All three of my Earth & Altar sonnets deal with language, limits, and liminal spaces. I wrote them because I saw what Malcolm Guite was doing and wanted to see what I’d do with a less decorative, less…normative?…approach.

I’m not primarily interested in these pieces as engines of devotion, then, even though I think they say a lot about my own spirituality. Neither am I looking to make normative religious statements, though I do think there’s an interrogative duty and that is perhaps why these poems end in questions.

Here’s “Natural Speech.”

There’s also a new free post about Richard Brautigan’s beautiful “I Was Trying to Describe You to Someone” on my Substack.

Just Published: “Grazing on the Kyll” at Earth & Altar

Many thanks to Earth & Altar and arts and culture editor Terry J. Stokes for thoughtfully engaging this piece and giving it a wonderful home.

“Grazing on the Kyll” is a sonnet in the Petrarchan or Italian model, inspired by recent reading and revisiting of formal structures. It opened up the writing of two other pieces, which I hope to place soon.

While I have never been of the opinion that there is only one way to write (and I don’t typically write formal verse), the challenge of the form was rewarding for me as a writer. I hope it will be rewarding for readers, too.

Read it here, and feel free to comment below!